War for the Mind (Production and vocals) Need feed back

[switch-man]

War for the Mind: War for the Mind - Clyp

I made the instrumental on FL Studio 11 and recorded my vocals on Audacity using an Audio Technica AT2020 Condenser going into a Presonus Audiobox USB 96


I left feedback here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-south-etc/creative-scars-eternal-f4f-543948/

 

[RadiumOfficial]

not bad, all the elements are their but just needs a bit of work on the mixing, keep it up!
check out my latest beat if you get a chance:
Fly by Radium | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[switch-man]

What exactly would you recommend on that end?

 

[Stmsck]

This is solid man. It's hard to really describe. It's balanced and all the sounds are sitting right. I guess they just sound a little "stock" if that makes sense. Try re-amping techniques, modulation, and stuff like that. Other than that though its super solid. Nice job.

[h=1]Smooth Beat Making Video[/h]

 

[switch-man]

War for the Mind - Clyp

The link in the OP no longer works. Here's an updated version.