Versus

24FITMAN

24FITMAN

Hip Hop Magnate
What up y'all, newly released track #5 off of THA HIjAQ Volume 2 -

"THA HIjAQ 105 - Versus" - Free Download

 
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Dope track.
Another cool oldschool vibe.
Vocals souning professional mixed.
I like that little reverb on the snare.
The sample i nice aswell.
I just would add some more breaks and stuff.
Panning of the hats nice too.
Keep it up!
 
I like this. Got an ambient feel to the beat, which definitely puts the focus on the vocals. I thought your delivery was on point too. This reminds me of some Pro Era type shit. Good work! Thanks for the feedback.
 
Dang this was dope brotha. If you're the rapper, the only advice I'll give to you is to make sure you don't stick to the same flow for too long. Most new rappers focus too much on the lyrics and rhymes and end up lacking on the flow side, which is what many people love almost as much as the lyrics themselves. Otherwise very good rapping bro! Not a diss, just something to watch out for, because you do have a good flow.

On the beat side, I think you should try changing the hook. But if this is more of a lyric focused song, its a great beat. It fits the mood of the lyrics well, and is pretty engaging on its own. Great job bro :D!!!

Please let me know what you think of my track. I'm a novice, and could use any advice :)
 
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