Trippie Redd X Juice wrld| hiphop beat | (feedback returned)

Its a nice track man but the melody is off key at certain points and it thrown the whole track off in my opinion.
Not sure if its a sample you got underneath or a section you played but I think it needs re-wroking. The whole concept is nice but tweak the melody and look at the mxiing to help enhance the track overall, look at the drums and the overall balance of the sounds. Keep it up bro!

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at first i didn't notice that a part of the melody was off key , I had to play the beat again and again and focus on it , now maybe see a little better what you mean.
your comment was helpful and constructive !
 
You need to fix the melodies beacuse there are some notes that are not in key and its kinda distracting, also the mix could be better. You need to make good balance between the instruments, in this case I think the drums need to be louder in the mix. Overall its a nice beat but you need to work more on making you melodies in key and the sound selection

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