Rock music producer produces first hip-hop track. Would love feedback / suggestions.

[GrainyCatcus]

I'm a rock music producer but was just asked to make and produce a hip hop track for a fun video project.
As this is my very first attempt at hip-hop I'd love to hear what people think and if anyone has any suggestions on how to step up my game with my next track.

The song starts at 15 seconds:
Vancouver's Official Rain Rap / Hip Hop Anthem - RAINCOUVER - YouTube

 

[D-Funkdafied]

I like the beat but the rap is kind of weird!

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[GrainyCatcus]

Yeah the rap is intentionally kinda weird. Supposed to be kinda funny. Thanks for the feedback!