i like the vibes you got but the bass rolls are way off beat, you need to fix the time stretching... the voice convo is odd... i don't understand it... the rap beat in the later part is good, still kinida sounds off beat, i recmmend using a time stretching app or plugin in a DAW to fit better.i generally don't like the filthy cussing and death threats in rap, the Sade remix is nice tho, too reverb-ey but if toned down it would sound much smoother.