Ok I gave it a listen...
Instrumentation: the lead synth has a very Asiatic feel to it. I like the melody. Did you play it or was it an apregiator? IMO I would've add another high instrument to compliment the lead either in the chorus or leading up to the chorus. I would also work on the breaks. They don't seem to flow with the song. One way to do this, is to add an fx; I recommend a sweep. I like the bass drum. It really hits. I would recommend layering your snare/snap to really bring it out.
Sequencing/playlist: I touched on your breaks. I would work on your beat drop. When artists such as myself are shopping for beats, this is one focus that we look for; and you really want to grab attention. I would also add a little more flare to stand out such as but not limited to: snare roll, hi hat doubles, etc. you want to give your beats that punch, but without overdoing it. Finding that balance is the key.
Mixing: I think this is the main area you want to focus on. You can have the greatest beat in the world but if it's not properly mixed, it will get overlooked. EQ is very important. Remember how I said your bass drum really hits? That's a good thing, but the problem is that it's muffled. I only know that it really hits because I produce myself. BUT the average listener won't be able to tell. So definitely take the time to mix each instrument after you compose/sequence. It'll make your track stand out. Then of course there's compression, distortion for your bass to stand out, panning, reverb on your instruments, Ewing your mids so they don't get lost in the track, soft clipper/reverb/eq/compression on your master bus, etc. there's more but this is just a quick summary.
Overall, nice track. Just learn how to make your tracks stand out and you'll be fine.
Gramz