- The instrumentation/melodies are solid
- The mix overall needs alot of improvement in my opinion -- i feel there's a lot going on -- example: the main pad/instrument that plays throughout feels like it clutters up the track too much
- I would find a better kick -- not really feeling the one you chose (just a personal opinion)
- Drum work is solid as well
Damn this beat was crazy! I love the happy vibes it brings. Really great usage of synths, the extra instrumentation worked well with each other, and they made the overall melody sound much greater. The drums fit track as well, great usage of percussion. Overall, I really dug this, it's mixed really well and has a great sound to it. Much respect.
Drums patterns are solid I would like a better kick with more punch. Liked the arrangement of the whole thing vibe was dope. Keep at it my g!
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The synths are dope bro..chords good and drum patterns def on point..,also feeling the plucks and that panning background perc that sounds like metal falling down the stairs is actually crazy loving it....really feeling this joint maybe just make the bass stand out a little more try some waveshaper on it or something great job tho it's sick