juice wrld type beat acid rap (need feedback on mix)

nice concept, not a fan of the loop/melody used. it doesnt loop right. lots to critique before we get to the mix. The intro was way too long. 4 bars is generally standard for the genre youre working in. Not sure if its the mix or your choice of sample but your 808s and drums are lacking. 808 sounds muddy in the mix and kick not strong enough to match the 808. Snare pattern was weird didnt feel on beat. The drop at the end didnt make sense. Do some studying. Listen to your fav artist but not as a fan listen for song structure. will teach you everything you need to know. Keep grinding you'll get better

heres my new beat for feedback when you get a sec thanks
 
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