Jet Set Radio - Let Mom Sleep (Vocal Mix)...hope you like!

[Smooth4lyfe]

Any Jet Set Radio fans/Gamers out there?
I did a freestyle to "Let Mom Sleep" from the game! I love the beat. Check it out let me know if you like it!
Ill return feedback if you want me to check something out

 

[DistortedWonder]

Your rap voice is hella dope tbh. The flow was solid also on this. The lyrics weren't really my cup of tea though but they work if you're going for the kinda video game rap type stuff. Overall this is sick, you can def rap fam

Would you mind leaving some feedback on this song?
https://soundcloud.com/distortedwonder/10-drive

 

[Smooth4lyfe]

Your rap voice is hella dope tbh. The flow was solid also on this. The lyrics weren't really my cup of tea though but they work if you're going for the kinda video game rap type stuff. Overall this is sick, you can def rap fam

Would you mind leaving some feedback on this song?
https://soundcloud.com/distortedwonder/10-drive

Yo this definitely potential!
The beat overpowers the vocal though so u gonna have to either lower the beat or increase the vocals a bit.
The chopping was nice but I would make it flow from the fast tempo into the chop, rather than just having the chop come right after...if that makes any sense.

Lyrics are pretty good and flow is nice.

 

[Wuffy]

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[J.SUL]

This is dope bro. I like the rapping and I honestly could see this being used for a commercial ad or a opening track to an mini show or something. It sounds nice. The mix is clear the track is grooving. Nice work!

When you get a chance, take a listen to my new track please.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...oove-who-do-you-think-sounds-like-f4f-530835/