I like it. can hear the hook in my head, but the 808s could come down, or use different ones.
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I agree that the mix sounds good and is good balanced. If you seek for what could be better, I would spend some more time on testing other 808s, the one you used sounds for me is either decaying too quickly or could be more massive (maybe compression)?
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