I think you can get more aggressive with the 808, its lacking a little bit more in the mid range to really cut through. I think if you were just tweak that distort it a little bit more you would be golden cus honestly I think the arrangement is pretty good. the beat is interesting all through out and really keeps you intrigued I just wish the 808 really punched through to the point where you feel in your chest lol Keep it up man!
production wise it this sounds pretty good. Nothing seems too loud or too low, and I'm not noticing any problems. If anything, the drums at around the 00:49 mark sound kinda awkward just with how they're arranged, but that's boaut it.