Criticism on new rap song

Lil Wire

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Hey guys, I just made my second rap song and posted it on my soundcloud,

I would greatly appreciate any and all criticism. Thanks!

My second song is the one titled "Heat [Prod. Guala Beatz]


Soundcloud link: bit.ly/lilwire
 
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You've got some good lyrics. Just keep at it, as you get more experience your production quality will get better. This is a good start.
 
Thanks for the feedback man! I greatly appreciate it.

However I actually didn't produce the music, It was a free for non profit use beat I found on youtube.
I kinda suck at producing music, But the lyrics are 100% by me.
 
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