Good stuff. I like what you did with panning the different sounds in this. I think the main could be in both though if you are putting other sounds panned to one side.
Nice beat, I agree that the main melody should really be panned equally on both sides. Mixing could be better. But yeah, melody is cool and all. Keep up!
like the eerie vibe it starts off with..ambient type sound
I think the mixing could be better on da drums and snares..i'd possibly layer da snare with a clap.