For AIR:
Cons:
The piano kind of sounds dry to me, maybe it needs more reverb or another effect to it.
Around 0:55, I do not think that is a good sound for the guitar, maybe you should try using another different type of VST for the sound.
Pros:
I like the way you chopped up the vocals in the beginning, and how it stay throughout the entire track. Good job on the vocals.
At 1:54 I like the gating sound, but the sound of the guitar needs to be replaced with something else.
Keep it up
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