This is definitely not bad, but there are a couple things you should pay attention on. first off, the mix sounds a bit empty, it feels like there is a hole in the low mids and bass frequencies. the break is nice and detailed, nice use of the different synths. the build up comes in a bit quick and doesnt really build up that much tension in my opinion. the drop sample works well, but the drop cant catch me at all. thats probably because of the missing lowmids/bass and also because you kept exactly to what you already got. supersaws and the same kind of melody, same kick, just a bit different chords. for more impact you could either cut the mix at like 180hz in the break and make the bass go in in the drop, or use a different instrumentation that fills the mix better and gives a more interesting texture. as wallengard said, it also sounds too squeezed. It definitely has potential but all in all I think working on the frequency spectrum and instrumentation would help a lot.