Inspired by Dilla -RIP- feed returned

[dillonraphael]

So I was listening to some Dilla beats for his birthday and he inspired me to make a beat. Heres what came from his inspiration. Need the criticism thats called creative lol. I will try and return all feedback.

http://www.usershare.net/f9mriuu0bt0j

 

[NOXBEATZ]

Listening... Everything seems too "clean" for a dilla style beat , the melody is ok but it's kind of everywhere.. even the drums.. There's really no solid pattern an emcee can really "ride over". The arrangement doesn't really "go anywhere" imo. That synth swell is kind of weak for the hook too. It's not bad but not really going anywhere and it's kind of an in between feeling than a rappable beat. Props for the dilla tribute though!

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[dillonraphael]

my purpose was not to imitate dilla, but just stating he was some inspiration. but thanks for the feedback

 

[RoyalHeartMusicGroup]

Yea, I see what you were doing here. It wasn't meant to copy Dilla, but a tribute to him. Like Chris Brown + Michael Jackson. Chris wouldn't try to sound like Michael, but like Chris Brown singing MJ's songs. Nice track, I can def fux wit it. Check me out if ya get a chance https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=358454 #backtothegrind

 

[dillonraphael]

feedback returned my dude

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Yea, I see what you were doing here. It wasn't meant to copy Dilla, but a tribute to him. Like Chris Brown + Michael Jackson. Chris wouldn't try to sound like Michael, but like Chris Brown singing MJ's songs. Nice track, I can def fux wit it. Check me out if ya get a chance https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=358454 #backtothegrind

Exactly!

 

[dikvanbil]

nice beat but it could use some more depth. like a heavier bassline or some low end instruments. plus i guess u could use a little less agressive kick to smoothen it out

 

[10fingaz]

Not bad, i dont like the sound of the bells though, synth could use some more structure. A different kick choice might help, keep wit it

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=358473

 

[Budski]

I like the sound. My friend showed me this. Check it out, its a Dilla tribute, same idea as you.

hungdizzle[dot]bandcamp[dot]com/album/re-dilla

 

[indhu]

it's iight mix could be done better tho

 

[schylardipre]

better than a lot of stuff I hear on here. You need to clean up the mix on this. I would exchange the bell for a different song too.

 

[bldubl]

Yeah I see what everyone is saying about the lack of depth. Everything is sort of coming at you at once with the same level of volume. I see where it's going though and with he right tweaking you might be able to pull it together pretty tightly. Hopefully you'll leave some feedback on my remix https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=358759

 

[BoneThug999]

i really like this one man
this drums are nice and the synth that comes in later
got a nice feel to it
check out mine
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=358742

 

[schylardipre]

better than a lot of stuff I hear on here. You need to clean up the mix on this. I would exchange the bell for a different song too.

I'm sorry, I meant for a different sound

 

[quantumleap]

i think i like the idea more than the actual beat...the sample or whatever...im not sure if its a sample or if you played everything...but all that sounds good in my opinion...however i dont really like the drum patterns..the mix sounds good...if there were different patterns to the drums i'd like it more.

check out my beat when ya get time https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=358871