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The drop is cool, but it's not really fitting the rest of the track I think. The transition doesn't connect the break with the buildup well... Maybe others think it's awesome but it's not doing it for me, sorry :(. I like the drop though if it was in a different song.

Could you return the favor if you have the time? Ludomir - On The Beach (Twincaps Remix) Thanks!
 
mandarin said:
The drop is cool, but it's not really fitting the rest of the track I think. The transition doesn't connect the break with the buildup well... Maybe others think it's awesome but it's not doing it for me, sorry :(. I like the drop though if it was in a different song.

Could you return the favor if you have the time? Ludomir - On The Beach (Twincaps Remix) Thanks!
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Well I appreciate the honesty and will look into some suggestions I've heard from others along they way! thank you and I will check it out now
 
Like the track, reminds me a little bit of animals by martin garrix. would like to hear an extra drum loop to add a
bit more energy to the track and add variation, i like the effect on the vocals. nice job.
 
Interesting, Some parts seem to get off beat or off sync before you drop back in on the 4 in the floor. What time signature are you in?
 
Fulloctave88 said:
Like the track, reminds me a little bit of animals by martin garrix. would like to hear an extra drum loop to add a
bit more energy to the track and add variation, i like the effect on the vocals. nice job.
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Thanks man! after listening to it a couple times I kind of feel like I was lazy the drop sounds so weak
 
ThotHteK said:
Interesting, Some parts seem to get off beat or off sync before you drop back in on the 4 in the floor. What time signature are you in?
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I was at 125 bpm to try to help the alignment because the stems I downloaded off spinnin's website were sorta out of wack and a little difficult to work with
 
Gre!g said:
- those crash are way too harsh.
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Yeah I'm kind of at the point right now where I rushed to get to the mastering and really over looking the track there's so many things I would change and I feel like the drop is weak and the plucked synth isnt really fitting it anymore. Theres only like 2 and a half weeks left in the competition so I guess it wouldn't be worth re uploading because I'd lose the spot I have already
 
I really like the beggining of the track, and all the effects at the beginning, but I feel that suddenly changes and there is none conection with the last part of the song, also I think the crashes are a little too loud, I enjoy the drop but I feel a little separate for the rest of the song. Keep doing remixes and post them! good job!
 
Foggy94 said:
I really like the beggining of the track, and all the effects at the beginning, but I feel that suddenly changes and there is none conection with the last part of the song, also I think the crashes are a little too loud, I enjoy the drop but I feel a little separate for the rest of the song. Keep doing remixes and post them! good job!
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Thanks man and yeah I worked pretty hard on the beginning of the track but I feel like I got a little lazy during the drop and I will!
 
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