[Techno]LWJ - Arpor

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Preview of a new track I'm working on.. not finished yet. Kind of a new style.. slow emo techno or something.
Enjoy.

 
hey local space,

for Arpor i liked the spacey synth sound you got going on , u may need to work on strengthening up your kick and bass to add some more power to the track

for Fraught i liked the percussive elements on this one but this track was lacking a musical interest such as progression or melody and maybe something to work on.

both tracks though sounded like you have the seeds of something to work on and hope you get round to finishing them
 
Thanks for checking first of all.. but I think our definitions of 'musical interest' diverge a bit. Which is fine, they're supposed to I suppose ;).
Your suggestions would pull these much more towards typical dance tracks.. which they're not supposed to be. What I'm after is more in the vein of Lakker, Andy Stott, Akkord.. that kind of thing, maybe a bit more accessible and dancefloor friendly.

 
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