Really interesting track, very experimental and has this psychedelic feel to it. I could hear this at like an underground club or something. I really like how you've changed the progression of the track and has a perceived time signature change. It's obviously 4/4 but there are some instances where (due to the instruments interchanging playing 1/4s, 1/8s triple time and double time) it makes it seem like it's being played in a 3/4 or a 5/8 time signature. Your production is pretty good and I think for the most part you do a good job at getting the mixdown to sound tight.
I think the only issue I personally have with this is I'm trying to figure out the theme and rhythm of the track, it just doesn't seem to flow well imo. I mean, if that's what you're going for, then that's cool, too. There seems to be some instruments that are clashing with each other and sound out of key (particularly on the second verse where the "chiptunes" break in).
But yeah, it's not bad but it does need a bit of tweaking before you can consider it a final, polished track.