Hey man. I'll be honest I wasn't expecting your track to be this good. Really loving the old school progressive house vibes I'm getting from this.
I agree with Kimble with the percussion being in key. I think he was talking about the little "blop" at around 1:22. Would've loved to have heard it raised up a semitone.
I DO however agree that the mix isn't perfect. It's doesn't bother me because it's pretty much already 90% of the way there and the composition/arrangement totally makes up for it.The chords are great and complement the vocal perfectly. Lot of variation so I don't get bored at any point listening to it. One thing that I'm noticing is that the "tick" of the kick could probably hit higher. I'd recommend layering it with one of the "clicks" from "kick 2" and it would really help give the kick more of the necessary high end to cut through.
I'm a sucker for string breakdowns so that part came out really cool. I'd say try to focus a little more on the mixing of the vocal especially in that section. My philosophy is that the vocal is the most important part of the track so you definitely wanna make sure that it always has the necessary "high end" (10k) to poke through the mix. You can also put a mid-side eq on the master and target the 3k region in ONLY the middle region to really bring the vocal to the front of the mix.
Also I don't know if you know this or if you've done it before but a really cool mastering trick you can do is whip out a "mid side" eq and remove pretty much all the side information up to about 150hz. It can really help clean up the low end stereo image in a track.
I also find your master to be somewhat warm which isn't bad but it might be able to use a little bit of a boost in the upper regions of the EQ spectrum. I feel like the energy of the drop isn't being maximized because it's lacking "presence". So maybe grab an EQ and try opening the master up a bit! It sort of sounds like it's underneath a blanket.
What string library are you using for the breaks if you don't mine me asking? That sounded really cool.
EDIT: Would you mind if I could get a download?
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