Hey mate,
It sounds good. You need to learn a little about song structure though. It's a little early in the morning for me but, it's roughly
" 8 bar intro > Hook /or Chorus/or Verse 1 > 4 bar transition to Chorus/Hook, or use last few bars of verse to lead into Chorus/Hook > 8 bar hook > verse 2 > 4 bar transition / last few bars use to lead into Chorus/Hook > 8 bar breakdown(Add a new synth/beat, something different to change it up) > Final Hook/Chorus "
That's about as close as I can get without having to check my notes lol. But that's how I was taught how to do it. Follow that structure and your music will start to flow a lot better.
That's the best advice I have right now without using my headphones to get a better depiction of your track. Good luck on your music bud.
