I quite like this. The intro isn't very spectacular, but the closer we get to that climax, it sounds better. Could have a little bit more force into that kick. When it actually kicks off it seems that your volumes are a lot more balanced than they are during the intro/break. I'm not sure why this is, but I think that it shouldn't be too hard for you to adjust that to get some of that pumping deep sounds into your intro.
Keep working man, interested to see what comes next!