New Deep House Track - F4F

[JackAlastair]

Hi,

Please feel free to check out my newest track 'Grain'. Please feel free to tell me what you think, I will endeavour to return feedback. I have also just created my new SoundCloud profile, so please leave me a follow on there.

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Thanks.

 

[beyond_horizont]

Hey there, nice track. I like the the reese bass as well as the organ, they sound pretty cool. A few tips from my perspective/taste:

- The kick could be a little less boxy, maybe think about a small dip around the 200 Hz area

- I would advice to give the high hat a bit more power with a mid layer and you could save the uplifting high/ride layers for later parts in the track (instead of starting with them directly on the intro)

- In this style you can add some subtile (but nevertheless very effective) swingy percussion

Keep it up!

 

[E1GHTH PLACE]

Great song and sounds pretty good in terms of production! Really like the vocal swell effect you've used here and also using it as a looping effect with an increase in delay and reverb. Aside from that, I do agree with beyond_horizont that the kicks are a little boxy and a quick EQ fix will do the trick. Also agree that you can give the hi-hats a swingy percussion feel which can be easily achievable by adding hot-swap grooves (assuming you use Ableton Live) to your hi-hat MIDI channel.
Other than that, really good stuff!

Thanks for sharing!