Hi guys I really would love some feedback for this original of mine THANK YOU!

[Osiris1027]

I am open to any critics. Any opinions on this track would be sincerely appreciated.
Thank you,
JH

Escape Compressed 2 by JH | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Aleida]

- Great piano, also the transition on it.
- Claps sound cool on their own, but combined with the kick it's a bit flat. Not sure what's going on there.
- The lead around 1:05 seems to be coming a bit out of nowhere. Maybe add the vocal chops before introducing the lead, so that that's the glue between the piano and the lead?
- All in all I really like it!

 

[Osiris1027]

Thanks dude, really appreciate the feedbacks. Definitely gonna work on it haha. Cheers mate.

 

[Mozex]

Sounds very good! I like it!