Feedback for First Track Please? - Will return

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BERMIO

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Hi FP members,
I just produced my very first track so I am curious what your opinion is!
Literally any feedback would help me so I will be thankfull to the people who take time to listen and comment.
I certainly will try to help the people who comment in return.


It's a Tech House track, you can find it by the private link below:
https://soundcloud.com/bermio/project/s-j32MD


Soundcloud shows me that there is still a little bit of Mixing & Mastering to do,
at 1:18, 1:46, 1:53, 2:08 and 2:17 the track peaks, but I don't really know which element it is,
at first I thought that it are the Synth (1:18) and the Crash (1:46) but it also peaks at random moments..
Thanks in advance for anybody who helps!
 
Hey man!

Great job for your first track, and welcome to the world of production. Thankfully I had been listening to 3 hours of tech house mixes prior to your song so I gained some more knowledge on the topic.

1. Turn down your risers; FX like risers are best used subtly to subconsciously build tension.
2. The kick at 3:00 sounds very punchy, great choice.
3. The mix sounds best when its full like from 3:00-4:00. The beginning is a bit bare - adding more ambience and reverb could help this.
4. For mastering, are you just using a simple limiter to reduce peaks? I find using the "clear master" preset on Maximus works wonders.
5. I'd recommend adding a little more variety with the lead, maybe adding a second layer like a high pluck playing the 5th harmony? Just a thought.

All around really solid tech house track. I'm only just getting into the genre but its growing on me quickly :)
 
very well done for the first track. I would fill out the spaces a bit more, add some more reverb and variation to the beginning. The risers are def way too loud. Maybe adding something more to the low end and turning up the volumes on all clips slightly, where you master is about -3 to -6, play around with it.

You can also add some pads or some more synths in the middle. Here is a track i made recently for free download, its an underground Techno/tech house track with tupac vocals and a melody at the end.

https://soundcloud.com/dejotoronto/dejo-saga-original-mix

here is another of similar style

https://soundcloud.com/basscrimesta...-locks-original-mix-bass-crimes-entertainment

and something more upbeat

https://soundcloud.com/basscrimestakeover/dejo-friday-original-mix
 
Thanks for the feedback man!
I really like your productions, great underground vibe! Gave you a follow at soundcloud and also sent you a private message!
 
kick is pretty perfect i reckon, the risers could be turned down quite a bit they do kinda take over too much, could've added a few fills to add a bit of variation to it but overrall for your first track its great mate, keep it up.
 
Thanks for the feedback man! When I have some more time I will certainly try to adjust the things you guys suggested, I really appreciate all the help!
 
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