Electronic Music! Great Start! Have I Improved?

[◮CYAN◭]

I believe I've had a turning point...

Tell me what you think pls. This is in the making, made it 2hrs ago. F4F Always I'll do my best to answer back everyone!



Thanks for tunin in

Update:

 

[JackedSystem]

Pretty cool, sounds bouncy and happy.

 

[slidemasterx]

This sounds great. At 0:20 one note seem to lag though. Is that on purpose?

 

[◮CYAN◭]

Here's an update....

Yes there are lagged notes....it may be delay runoff maybe... but i know I put double notes and offset notes.

check out the update



Tmrw I'm gonna try arrange it better...maybe a slow addition/progression.

 

[itsatrap]

Very original bro ! Good job on this one. I would add more instruments and try to master it. Add more high notes, side notes, mids just a solid lead that keeps the beat going but if this is what you are going for than there is no problem at all! Nice and original track

I would really appreciate it if you could check my work aswell https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ea-work-anill-oriental-trap-remix-f4f-473273/

 

[◮CYAN◭]

did u check the update?.....the first post was shy some notes...

Now I'm gonna build an arrangement from what I got here.

thanks for the listen, I'll be sure to feed you back later

 

[basement dweller]

Add a little bit more and this will sound really nice. Sounding good already but i feel like its missing something, but thats just me
good work... anyways check me out!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ent-dweller]-feed-4-feed-473335/#post49777002

 

[◮CYAN◭]

just giving this a lil bump

 

[YWM]

ur def getting better in your beatmaking man. i listened to the updated version. its very creative i msut say. the usage of the synths are real nice. i would suggest you try inc the volume of the synths at each transition so that theres a build-up feel goin with it. are you planning to extend this further?

apprecaite it if you could feed me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eedback/new-wiz-khalifa-type-beat-f4f-473332/

 

[◮CYAN◭]

ya i definitely am extending this....i have it in the works right now....

but I've been incredibly busy...again im too busy today to do anything...

I hate waiting too long cuz the creativity changes day to day and i can lose track of my progress or direction.

But yes i am making this into a track......and it will intro nicely and play out nice hopefully

Yeah i'm gonna do intervals, slight volume and velocity increases...slight filter increases.

I wanna make this a good 1, thanks for tuning in bro

 

[Ness Lee]

This is cool dude. its Unique. I think It needs some additions. I think some dramatic pads, Hard hitting reverby drums would add alot. And some cool effects would be nice too. Thats my opinion. I like where its headed.

 

[namesi]

It needs some ambiance. I would add a pad like the dude above me said. It will fill the track out more. Keep it up man.

 

[Ametrine]

Interesting track. The update was definitely much better. I just listened to the progression in your tracks on your soundcloud page and you've definitely gotten better! To really bring it to the next level, I suggest you learn more about automation. It'll help give your arrangements more complexity and variation.

If you can, let me know what you think of my track: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...e-feedback/1984-progressive-house-f4f-473436/

 

[◮CYAN◭]

THANKS FOR THE ENCOURAGEMENT

HERE IS ANOTHER GREAT UPDATE...



I know a lot about engineering but I havent been applying myself really....
I've been learning bit by bit, and I've finally reached that turning point where it all makes sense.

I'll still have crazy experimental stuff that doesnt make much sense at times, it means something to me lol

thanks for stopping by i''l return feed tmrw bro