Cool. It sort of reminded me of finger bib by apex twin. Id look into bringing out the bass and low end quite a bit since its certainly lacking. Layering the kick with a low 808 boom perhaps
I like the idea man. Definately liking the Dominican dembow riddim you chose near the beginning of the track. Matches the vibe well. For improvements, try adding more power to the low end and the drums themselves. They sound shy in the mix, and Reggae tracks usually have an emphasis on strong drums. Everything else is awesome in the mix. Keep it up homie!
Here's my track! It's basically the same concept as yours, except I'm taking Reggaeton and mixing it with EDM. Let me know what you think!