- vocal sounds one sided, it gives me a headache., try mono it , and then parallel process to spread it using chrous , wideners, phasers , reverb , delays etc, you could parallel all those and probably add a tiny bit of each , who knows what it comes out ,? experiment
- bass is indeed terrible , it fights in the lows , try editing it, as the kick ends cut the bass from there and cross fade it.
- before the build add like some reverse hats , or add a huge re verb to the first word alone, then bounce it down , import , then reverse it before the vocal hits as it sounds cool to like build a little before.
- the crash in the beginning cut out some Hpf the mids , add a delay.
- is this a remix ? na just kidding...