"AKIL STILL A VIRGIN" and "TIME"....2 new songs... feed for feed

Still a Virgin: The sample is smooth, a bit of an overused drum break but it's a classic and it works. Lyrics were comical and enjoyable; if you're as young as you sound, you have a keen & entertaining sense of self-awareness. Work on your flow though, both keeping it in the pocket and switching up the rhythms.

Keep grinding and go kill it

Would appreciate feedback on the song in my sig.
 
I agree with the guy above as well. The creativity of the concept was good and not the average which is always a plus. Delivery could use some sharpening but other then that stay at it keep writing keep tryna push yourself as well as your craft.

Would appreciate feedback on me and my teams music, can be found on the thread that reads"The Robotiks!!" Good luck
 
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