man a battles a battle dont take what i said to heart , everyone gets better with time , some longer than others.. it took me 8 years to master my ****. advice... eq ur melodies/string sections more , decrease bass in everything but drums and bass , and always demud ur whole track in the master channel by hipass filtering at 20 HZ , that way ur system/other persons system isnt pumping out a bunch of inaudible mud that has a much longer length which drags down ur high end , the art of the mix is an important side of it and also try to organize ur melody , dont overload it with a bunch of nonsense , find a bass note root , stick to it for everytime it changes/ only certain beats like the clipse mr me too instrumental can get away with the offkey swagger. ull get better man , stay elevating im only here to give advice and i like how ur actually trying something different.