New Trap Banger (f4f)

i'm really digging how you introduce the different elements in the intro, sets the tone very well. your hi-hats and snare rolls are on ****in' point man. you've got some great change-ups and you do a great job of keeping the listener engaged. i think you could bring the bass up, and might want to adjust it so that it adds a little bit more in terms of melody... that's just me. congrats on your first year dude! hope to see a thread another year from now :)

this is an edit of a song i've been working on. would love to know what you and anyone else who cares to give a critique would think!
https://soundcloud.com/alackof/****-zen
 
seriouslylacking said:
i'm really digging how you introduce the different elements in the intro, sets the tone very well. your hi-hats and snare rolls are on ****in' point man. you've got some great change-ups and you do a great job of keeping the listener engaged. i think you could bring the bass up, and might want to adjust it so that it adds a little bit more in terms of melody... that's just me. congrats on your first year dude! hope to see a thread another year from now :)

this is an edit of a song i've been working on. would love to know what you and anyone else who cares to give a critique would think!
https://soundcloud.com/alackof/****-zen
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Thanks for the great feedback man ! your link dosnt work cant leave you feedback ....

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beamerbeatz said:
at first I was like :( then when I was like :D loving it bruh.
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haha Thanks .
 
Samallam said:
Nice big clean sub sound man, great melody! A nice vocal loop would work reaaaallly well. nice build up of layering on the melody toward the end! Try adding a tonal hit or snare under that clap, see what it sound like! awesome job tho man!

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ix-master-come-tell-me-what-you-think-451567/

Let me know what ya think?! :D
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Thanks man im trying to get someone on it and i agree with you about the clap , just return some feed on your post .

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circab said:
Someone has a nice sample bank!

Haha.

Ok cool intro, drew me right in to the beat.

Cool piano line, nice melody and good use of space between elements.

Pretty cool, how long have you been producing?

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...kid-cudi-memories-remix-work-progress-451568/
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Thanks man preciate it ! been producing for a year ,just left you some feed ..

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Thanks yall for comments , feed been return to everyone!
 
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Cdojaa said:
Pretty nice man !
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Thanks!

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MistaRedz said:
Man this is nice, keep it up bro, lookin forward to hearin more.
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Glad to hear that , thanks bro

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Inert DnB said:
Hello.

Truly one of the better trap songs I have heard.

Good work!
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wow thanks man preciate it bruh
 
MAn you do this sound really really well. Got a full sub and your drum patterns are cool with a great place in the centre of the mix. I think with your production skills you could definitely end up developing your own sound and taking it to the next level though.
The beat is sick but someone did say it has been done before which isn't a bad thing but I just think with your kind of talents you could use them to get people mad for what YOU'RE about. Hard to word it properly but hope you get what I mean.

Check my latest if you can - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...back/dpat-touch-bass-cover-rework-f4f-451906/
 
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