Just turned my hs80's on to listen the mix.
The mix is crystal clean n sounds really good.
I liked the beat overall and the drum pattern is really nice
I liked the vocals, and the melodies after the break made it more interesting but i think the sounds could be better. The kick was dope, the clap sound i didn't enjoy too much, cause i'm not fan of big claps. But it was alright. You could maybe turn the claps down just a few db's and sprinkle some crack on the drum pattern before you leave it. Has a old school vibe with some funky melodies, so overall good job.
Okay, overall the idea is interesting.
So I'm pointing out my worrys about the mix:
First of all: overdone stereo tracking the vocals. Narrow the pan angle. Sounds like you used full 180°
The Drums sound a bit too dry. I guess you wanted them to be agressive, they sound like being overdriven/jumping a bit over the +-0db mark.
Also at 0:41 and following the glock or whatever sounding instrument also jumps over the 0db. Not very effective for such a calm instrument. If you want it to be outstanding, add a few overtone harmonics and (again) narrow the pan angle.
Looking at the total, sounds like you used different reverbs/ your samples weren't 100% dry?
Overall (including melody and formal aspects) this one sounds diffusing, not in a negative way, just want to mention it in case you want to achive a different sound.
Hope that helps.
widekeys
I would say that it is good enough!! You got a very creative mind. I like the beats! Cool stuff!!
The over mix is nice and clean but as widekeys mentioned before me, the drums sounds a bit dry! The beat is not really what I've got used to but a pretty dope idea. You must be german or a german decent because that beat sounds like a typical underground beat from Germany I'm from Hungary!
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I really like it! good job!
Sounds really nice!!!