This song has a different vibe to it. It's not necessarily my style, but it doesn't mean there aren't pretty cool elements used throughout the piece as a whole. I think the major strength of this song is the unique sound selection. Its something that I wouldn't associate hip hop with. I think the main melody with the synths is pretty cool and the accompanying harmony is good. I really like your effort to be different, man. Keep it up!
I'm personally still working on better sound selection and song composition, but fuck it. Here is a song I just put up a few days ago. Let me know what you think:
https://soundcloud.com/mr-fem-bot/no-love-lost