Just listened I liked the horns but the lead melody i felt could of had a bit more variation to it. That flute breakdown seemed a bit out of place, a little too airy and should be replaced with a sound a little more thicker. Other than that I liked the drum pattern. Keep at it g!
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- The melodies are good
- I think the beat starts too abrupty and too harsh
- The drum pattern is good
- I would have better soudn selection as well -- not feeling the quality of the sounds you used
- Overall -- the mix needs to be alot better -- the kick needs to cut through more in the mix -- I say you turn it up in the mix, layer it with more kicks and/or find a different kick
- Snare needs to be raised more too -- make sure the and the kick snare is almost the loudest thing in your mix to make yor mixes sound nice -- trust me on that!
Great potential for a beat because the composition on the point. Just need to work on the mix and sound selection
I like the beat and the instrumentation that you have, but I think it needs something more. Maybe add an octave of the lead flute, and give the melody some more variation, maybe change up the instrument that's playing lead. I really dig the horns too, overall dope track keep it up!
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I can hear the potential in it, but the sounds you used don't really do it for me. A heavier kick and louder snare would instantly make it better, but the sound selection on the instruments should be changed up in my personal opinion. Keep workin' on it, my man.