Schoolboy Q Oxymoron Type Beat- Swervin F4F

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donny7337

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Hey guys, here's a new schoolboy q type beat, I could definitely see this on his new album, tell me what you think and I'll return the feed. Thanks

 
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I feel like the sweep at the beginning could be more dramatic. Good shit with the drums, I'm diggin' it. Really nice vibe at that switch-up in the middle, could of varied the drums more tho or added a drum break there. Felt like a sweep could have been added there to when you went back to the main beat. Overall, the sounds are great. Just gotta switch it up more.

Give some feedback back when you can!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...[f4f]-drake-ambient-beat-464795/#post49734144
 
SizzlinKola said:
I feel like the sweep at the beginning could be more dramatic. Good shit with the drums, I'm diggin' it. Really nice vibe at that switch-up in the middle, could of varied the drums more tho or added a drum break there. Felt like a sweep could have been added there to when you went back to the main beat. Overall, the sounds are great. Just gotta switch it up more.

Give some feedback back when you can!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...[f4f]-drake-ambient-beat-464795/#post49734144
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Thanks for the feed
 
Really like the sound of the drums, I would maybe like some kind of melodic layer there, or somekinda sample over it, to make it maybe more organic (i just love sampling :D). And I really like the break at 2:31 and the ambient sounds there.
Good job :)
 
Really liked this a lot. It reminded me a lot of "My Hatin Joint" which is a dope song. The little snare stick/percussive element you had in the drums really stood out for me, because I thought it gave this track a lot of character. As others have said, the transitional break-out part was well-done.

As far as suggestions, I feel like a vocal sample of some sort would be a nice flourish. I'm imagining a warped, female voice of some sort. You could throw it in reverse to make kinda eerie and whatnot. Other than that, I really dug this track. I didn't mind the repetition so much as the others did but I do think there's room here for another element or two.

Check me out when you get a chance: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...a-what-type-genre-though-464855/#post49734526
 
ryanmcnally said:
Really liked this a lot. It reminded me a lot of "My Hatin Joint" which is a dope song. The little snare stick/percussive element you had in the drums really stood out for me, because I thought it gave this track a lot of character. As others have said, the transitional break-out part was well-done.

As far as suggestions, I feel like a vocal sample of some sort would be a nice flourish. I'm imagining a warped, female voice of some sort. You could throw it in reverse to make kinda eerie and whatnot. Other than that, I really dug this track. I didn't mind the repetition so much as the others did but I do think there's room here for another element or two.

Check me out when you get a chance: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...a-what-type-genre-though-464855/#post49734526
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Thanks for that feed man
 
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