- I like the melodies
- I would choose a different snare -- i would also bring up the snare in the mix
- The drum pattern is good though
- Arrangement is good
- Overall the mix could use some improvement...example: the string/string pad in the middle of the track could be lowered alot more and some frequencies of it can be cut to have more room in the mix
- The synth (that sounds like a siren-type synth) can be lowered as well, etc.
Instrumentation and arrangement is good but mixing could use work!