Punchline time!!! Drop two bars at a time (gotta be dope though!)

Jramos said:
i used to write through middle school and high school, so I spent a good 5 or 6 years at it, but I havent rapped since Ive been in college, no excuse but thats why im rusty lol
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ah not bad ur still pretty intense
ive been rapping for almost 7 years still working on my
flow to get better lol
im not giving up tho
u shouldnt either (=
rusty or not i gotta admit
i got abit shocked i havent
seen such good writing like that in 1 hell
of a long ass time bro:P:P
 
brush the dirt off my shoulders/its over/ for all a ya'll
shady rats I hol(e) up/ cause i am a, ground hog
you popguys/ finished/when i spit/ you eatin some stale spinach
citing cites/ that you is runnin/ misciting that i was in it
 
but now that i am in in it/ i really dont want end it
i am a train wreck wait ya'll gettin rear ended
get your whole career ended/ before you get to get in it
word play or punchlines get at me or get the bizness
 
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they're into punchline(s) for, "Hey Kool-Aid!" or Hi-C man,
the only drink here, is your girl chugging my semen...

lol
 
Phaceless said:
but now that i am in in it/ i really dont want end it
i am a train wreck wait ya'll gettin rear ended
get your whole career ended/ before you get to get in it
word play or punchlines get at me or get the bizness
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here go something bro

i got about seven colors on my chain stora like a rainbow? and i'm balling like i'm kobe YUP just got number 4/ Step in the spotlight i'm go shine like a light blub/ and destroy all fu ck nig gas who claiming to be thugs/ **** my bad only 2 bars right/ well i don't give a fu ck lets see you try to take this mic/ and i'll fuc king end ya career and ya life at once/ mutitaskling is what called killin nig gas for lunch/ at 16 you dont pose to have alot/ not why i got mo papper in my account than ya whole blocks mail box


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Vic Beatz said:
here go something bro

i got about seven colors on my chain stora like a rainbow? and i'm balling like i'm kobe YUP just got number 4/ Step in the spotlight i'm go shine like a light blub/ and destroy all fu ck nig gas who claiming to be thugs/ **** my bad only 2 bars right/ well i don't give a fu ck lets see you try to take this mic/ and i'll fuc king end ya career and ya life at once/ mutitaskling is what called killin nig gas for lunch/ at 16 you dont pose to have alot/ not why i got mo papper in my account than ya whole blocks mail box


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ok then youngin learn respect
and all ya paper is bounced checks
unless you goin to the league
you are out matched and outta ya league
i fish lines and got em in a net
but your thug lines are just inter net
you "staora like a rainbow"
does that mean you're sorta gay and blow?
 
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Phaceless said:
ok then youngin learn respect
ya paper is bounced checks
unless you goin to the league
you are out matched and outta ya league
i fish lines and got em in a net
but your thug lines are just inter net
you "staora like a rainbow"
does that mean your sort gay and blow?
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lmao phaceless that's good im quoting it on urs
cuz his wus fkin priceless
god knos y that ***** is lifeless:P:P
not to u phaceless lmao
but dayum that really sucked his rap
no offence:P:P
 
Phaceless said:
ok then youngin learn respect
ya paper is bounced checks
unless you goin to the league
you are out matched and outta ya league
i fish lines and got em in a net
but your thug lines are just inter net
you "staora like a rainbow"
does that mean your sort gay and blow?
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come on now dog you pay me for reading that bull shi t
i heard better rymhes from that arab dude who souljia boy hang wit
and don't start the gay jokes cause i got my girls then you know so stop hating
I was wilt's role model and your is clay akin

So never try to talk shi t to someone that is over you
cause if its happens agian i'm good bring the goons and whoop the **** out of you dude.

lol the junk fun
 
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Vic Beatz said:
come on now dog you pay me for reading that bull shi t
i heard better rymhes from that arab dude who souljia boy hang wit
and don't start the gay jokes cause i got my girls then you know so stop hating
I was wilt's role model and your is clay akin

So never try to talk shi t to someone that is over you
cause if its happens agian i'm good bring the goons and whoop the **** out of you dude.

lol the junk fun
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um.....by goons, do u mean a goon squad?
u kno like baboons, cuz that's wut i thought :S:S
 
you better bring somebody
more goons mean more bodies
you couldnt whoop me if i was tag team
so snap outta ya dam dream
yea i take after clay akin
leave you under clay achin
so wrap up and hoped u saved by the bell
your guns prolly like crab cakes it dont gotta shell
 
1st I check levels then I press dat button, might even start off mumbling till I come up wit something
I AINT FRONTIN REAL TALK/ I could give a fuk if yall feel dawg/infect ya computer wit a trojan and kill all yall
 
I drop my two and then Im out for sure / Im more outta place than Timberlake in Alpha Dog
And ya chick licks the dick til her mouth goes raw / Then i roll over and sh!t on her like a rabid Labrador
 
ha and I am not a rapper/I am a producer and I am good with words also nice with beats/ so F*ck them other n*ggaz and n*gga come and shop with me/ Naw I'm playin but yall really should come shop with me Indiana's #1 supplier yeah I supply the streets.
 
my words be intense like a fatman avoiding fitness,
what is this wais takin care of business,
thats why my cds on ya wish list,
i be like a guerrilla in tha mist, neva leave a witness
 
N*ggaz yell while luger shells fell from my ruger
turning' me into one heLLLL of a felony shooter!
 
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