Great work with the percussion my friend! Honestly the percussion tells the whole story in this beat - I feel like it's so dynamic and exciting and kind of overshadows the other parts of the track. You've got some good ideas going on behind the percussion but they feel like an afterthought.
I would love to hear this percussion beat written to as a R&B kind of Justin Timberlake style song with some great little piano, guitar, bass, and other elements to really fill it out. Right now the beat surrounding the percussion feels a bit thin without enough bass and without enough substance, which is too bad because the percussion bangs! And in this style the percussion is most important anyways, so keep refining this, you are really talented!
Overall great work – keep it up my friend!
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