Yeah man, just to give you perspective I also would've chopped it up and manipulated the chops, the reason being that right now it has a very sort of 'swingy-pop' feel, or like an old flock of seagulls track with the guitar in the back (hah), but right now the feel/timing of it feels more 'poppy' then it does hip hop. You still flipped it nice though, and its cool. good work