Interesting drop, i like how the bass line works on that. Snare fits well, vibe sounds good. It's a little quiet for my taste but can see some quality on the track, would be nice to see someone rapping over it. Good luck out there. Could you check any track on my soundcloud please?
The part where the beat breaks down I really wished you played some more keys, like another melody in a higher octave, that would of sounded dope. Still a nice beat though bro.
i like this, the chords sound really dope and smooth
agree w messy some simple high octave melody at 1:12 or some bars after that would sound really nice
personally id do something with the snare, make it more crisp/sharper and add some (delayed) reverb maybe
the 808s have a good pattern but sounds to me like theyre just a few cents off key
otherwise this is some good work bro, well structured and everything just some little details
- The snare sounds like it could be a little brighter in my opinion. Just a bit though.
- Throwing in a couple counter-melody parts could really spice this track up as well.
Other than that I'd say this track is awesome. Love how it progresses and everything. Could definitely hear PND on this one.
Keep up the great work man!
Really like the tone of those chords. They sound really nice. I agree that the snare sound could be eqed a little differently. I really like the kick in this though. The beat overall has a great atmosphere, kind of sad and longing sounding.
Liked the piano a lot. Snare I wasnt a big fan of. I think the bass was a tad bit overpowering in the mix. When you slowed down the song and took out elements i get that you were trying to build up for the drop again but it was too empty and a bit boring waiting for the the beat to come back in. you totally killed on achieving pnds kind of vibe and sounds.
You killed it with the melody. I can hear that you took your time with mixing this, spec. with the bass. Track is very solid and "one piece" ( instruments are perfectly chosen, pitches match and the vibe is good )