LOVE THE SHINE LOUDER INTRO
THe CHICK IS HOT! LOL
good flow on the verses
the shots of the kids and the crib are good..
the street scenes n city landscapes during the hook are real nice. i would have preferred more of the city landscape shots within the verse not just the hook. but thats my most humble opinion.
the second part/song [lving for the day] has a better feel to the visuals, the camera angles and switches/transtions look better.. you were more active in it
I wouldnt be mad at all if you gave me your opinion of my own video project:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C06WIGAoZzs