My reality-Last call

[milw0rm]

Hey wasgood yall its me rapping over kanyes last call looking for some feedback yall can feel free to critique as much as yall want Thank youu My reality - Last call by milw0rm uploaded in Hip Hop tracks & Instrumentals
https://soundcloud.com/santiago-andres-rivera/my-reality

 

[Donta Black]

For the most part you got a decent flow you started off nice but then it got choppy in the middle then you got everything back together, your bars are coo also keep at it partna, Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...wa-2k14-prod-@dblkmusic1-459930/#post49710648