Michael Jackson inspired song

[BoardingHouseReach]

Appreciate any feedback

 

[Cayden Carrell]

Keep it up. Missing a hooky chorus though

 

[kegotkeys]

Appreciate any feedback

Dope Idea! I would work on mixing the vocal track better so your vocals SHiNE more, possibly some automated delay on those parts where you repeat yourself...

Those cadences though definetly got me inspired

Bring that badboy into a DAW and throw a simple drumloop at the end to make it bigger the last 60-90 seconds to add an EPiC closing if it sounds good to you!

 

[BoardingHouseReach]

Dope Idea! I would work on mixing the vocal track better so your vocals SHiNE more, possibly some automated delay on those parts where you repeat yourself...

Those cadences though definetly got me inspired

Bring that badboy into a DAW and throw a simple drumloop at the end to make it bigger the last 60-90 seconds to add an EPiC closing if it sounds good to you!

Thanks, will try out more effects on the vocal.