Ima 16 yrs old Rapper - feddback searched - thanks guys

[MannyDaKid]

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Hey i am a young 16 yrs old rapper from germany and i wanted to ask if you could check out a few songs i did.
i think feedback is a great opportunity to improve my work..
so pls tell me what i could do better but pls dont hate

thanks guys

here are 2 songs:
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https://soundcloud.com/mannydakid/manny-da-kid-stimmen-in-meinem https://soundcloud.com/mannydakid/manny-da-kid-phonix-prod-by-kyduh-beatz