The pro's of your track here include the vocal, this is the highlight of your track, it' encapsulates me especially when the drop kicks in, the trumpet you've incorporated here is also pretty energetic, it's in tune with the summer festivities here. The key here isn't producing the 'perfect' song, but creating the perfect ideal song that you would find enjoyable, something that you would play over & over again on your iPod. You start the track off great here with the vocals, that's more of a mature technique here especially when using any vocal in the mix.
The con's here are directed to the mix, I'd add a little compression to your mix, perhaps an added bass at 0:47 right through to the first drop on the first break, a moderate small bass before your wide bass + sub bass drop kicks in. In my opinion, the hardest part about any track would be the second break straight after the drop, raising the energy of the track like you did in the beginning takes some thought, you don't want to parade the track for what may sound like a long 10 years, remember, how would "you" want to break this track down.
Overall, not a bad effort, nicely done.