The kick&snare combinations is very good tome, like how them two sound. 808 is fine too, main melody is interesting. But i don't like how the closed hi-hat sounds, think you need to change it's noise. Open hi-hat could help ya on this track too. But i already how it sounds overall, good work. Could you check any track on my soundcloud please?
Feeling the percussion movement on this track. Mellow feel and pretty easy for any artist that wants tp jump on. I would like to hear a more prominent bassline.