your break is actually pretty good I like that choice of sounds, the chords fit well to the melody and you're playing a bit around with the tension
now be careful with those effects (impacts, crash, percussive elements,...), look at your volumes and more important look for samples that really fit the mood of your production and not just those "Banger EDM Festival" standard samples if you know what I mean. Also your drop contains some good layers but you are definitely missing some low end there, so put a low-pitched saw under your drop and it will hit much harder.
keep on working, the most production skill doesn't come from forum members, but from your own experience so just continue with that!