I like your direction. A little too cluttered. Mix is clean. Sounds like loops. Need better transitions and breakdowns for this type of beat. Not your best effort.
iPhone beat f4f
When I say mix is clean I mean it’s not muddy, there clarity. As far as loop I mean there is no variance. You just adding and taking out “loops” that you played.
Your loops need variance dude. You don’t do that with any of your music. U need to edit better. Trust me. Check the song in my signature.
You legit make NO sense at all lol do you know anything about music ? near enough to every song from various genres of music will have the same melodic, chord & drum patterns play throughout the song at certain sections they remove them or play in new patterns for variation as I did stated before this is done to create rhythm and movement in music if everything kept changing every second the music wouldn't sound as good. How often do you see a song that has a different melody, chord & drum pattern on every bar HARDLY any so as I said again what are you on about and what makes this more funny is that your saying my music has no variance when I've listened to yours and its the exact same thing sounds that just loop and don't change throughout the whole track. Tbh I don't think you have much knowledge on music, musical theory/structure its 2018 no one makes atonal music anymore if you even know what that is.
okay. Whatever. Your beat sounds like shit. It’s not perfect. Your drums especially need variance. Stop responding because I don’t like your beat
Also that’s not grime
Thing is I know more about music that you
Like I will say again. My musics better
Like I will say again. My musics better
You seem real triggered maybe stop commenting on my thread go learn a thing or two about music then come back and leave people constructive feedback instead of "your drums are shit"
When I say my musics better I mean my theory. Yours is nonexistent. Also I just started posting and I get some of the most views. People may think your mix is better but my theory is way better. Also, I don’t get bad critiques. In addition I made a lot of my beats on the phone.