I will say the intro melody sounds out of key or out of tune or maybe you are playing in a different scale? Idk something sounds off. The drums are dope very boom bap inspired. I do like the fact that when the verse section it opens up for a vocalist or a rapper. Keep at it man!!
Yeah the main brass synth lead is out of tune
in a way all of it sounds out of tune but still can work
as far as the mix i like how the drums and bass sit
Keep it up man