Phew. Cool me off.
First off, you're extremely talented. As I'm sure you've gathered about yourself at this point.
The only thing I'll say about you is that I think, because it's instrumental--and I get it--these have a tendency to be overbloated with a lot of good ideas. That makes sense though, like I said; the instrumental alone has to carry all the work. However, because of this, to me, your best track was, if you ask me, the most straightforward beat: "Fear."
I love this track. It looks like they're free, on bandcamp? If so, I'm going to see if I can come up with something to that.
Keep at it. I can tell that, with the right rapper, you'll be successful. You're gift, man.
When you get time, help me out with the mix here! Or hell, help me out with any ideas at all!